留学申请书写作结构及范文分享

  近年来很多的人都会选择申请出国留学,对于想要出国留学的小伙伴们来说,写出国留学的申请书是避免不了的,下面是出国留学网小编给大家带来的有关于出国留学的申请写作!希望能够帮助到大家。

  留学申请书结构

  一、开头:申请动机小故事+申请的学校/项目

  开头基本上都是申请动机,无论以何种形式。有人会用小时候的经历,有人会用家庭教育,有人会用听的一个讲座的启发等等。 很多介绍留学文书写作的文章都说开头一定要吸引人。他们说的没错,对于有精^ a n y r C彩的故事的同学当然建议把这些放在开头,但是并不是每一个人都有很吸引人的经历可写,所以,真实就好,用诚心打动录取委员会成员。写完动机后需要根据动机提出自己的目标,也就是我们经常说的short term /long term goal,接着就可以很自然的把话题引到要申请的学校。然后指出为什么我要申请这个学校的xx项目,可以适当的吹捧一下这个项目或者学校。

  二、正文:大学学习+大学的科研经历(理工科类)或者参加的对申x K m请有帮助的活动(文科类)+特殊的经历的有机结合

  正文部分是实实在在的将你的经历你的背景展现给招生委员会看的地方。你的内容决定了他们将看到怎么样的一个你。所以对于内容的选择一定要慎重。这部分是最难写的或也是最难介A ? f i d绍经验的部分,因为每个人的经历都有自己的特色,如何组织如何表现需要每一位申请者去反复思考。这里我就提一些重要的Tips,帮助大家完成一个具有逻辑性,且上下M | k { = h s i C文呼应的正文。

  1.每段确定一个中心句或中心思想

  这种看似小学生的做法其实是非常有效的,让人一眼知道你要说什么。但是表现形式可以是多样化的。可以放在开头或结尾,也可以揉和到所写的事例之中。] Y $ h

  2.把自身经历与在开头提到的长期或i * 5 U J Z者短期i m # b p 7目标所结合

  我刚开始写留学文书时,正文部分只是简单地堆砌了我在大学做了什么. 1 ?,有什么样的表现,完全忽略了与自己开头所定的长期或者短期目标所结合。这样就使得内容失去了方向,变得空洞无力。所以大家一定要注意:精心挑选自己的内容,让人感觉到这w v g些内容都能直接或者间接的为实现自己的目标所服务。并且,在叙述每一个内容时或者之后,尽量巧妙地把自身目标揉和进去,做到有的放矢。

  3.把申请的项目特点与自身经历所结合;

  这点其实和第一点有些像。结合第一点,] ` z Y A大家需要考虑的是如何把自身经历,目标以及项目特点所结合,最好的效果是把三者潜移默化的揉和在一起或者两两结合

  4.经历要分主次

  突出自己的unique的地方,对于和别人差不多的但又不能不写c Y I L j ] x 的部分少用笔墨。

  容易出现亮点u ( _ i ! 5 t x的地方:

  (1)科研(理工科),有paper的话好好强调,没有的话也不要桑心,写清楚做了什么学到了什么,从中感悟到了什么。

  (2)志愿者经历,internship工作经历 (文科): 美= Z E x n国人特别7 D Z 6 } h喜欢志愿者经历什么的,如果是那种到山区执教,一定要大书特书。写得时候注意强调你作为一个individual,给某个弱势群体,这个社会带来了什么改变。

  (3)交换经历:外国的交换经历无疑也是申请的一个大亮点,记得吹一下选拔多难,然后自己如何脱颖而出。到了国外以后的一些special 的例子,表现自己的适应能力、科研能力、语言能力、social能力、领导力等。

  三、结尾: 呼应开头+对学校的特殊了解和感情

  一般会用各种方式再次引出自己的长期目标(用什么方式?自己想啦,我用的名人名言啦)。然后结合自己的长期目标再次引出要申请的学校的项目。这里要注意的是需要D 9 4 ~ + y B ? M对学校的项目有比较深入的了解,知道项目的特色,甚至可以知道这个学校有哪些著名的校友。然后将自己的兴趣与学校的项目契合起来,让人感觉这个项目是为了帮助你实现长期目标所量身打造的。另外可以用少量笔墨提一下自己可以给项目,甚至给美国社会(communit% w N ] ! v O ly)所带来的贡献。

  留学申请书范文

  范文一、

  Due to the comprehensiveness of China’s “reform and open” policies, economics plays an increasinZ 1 Ogly important role in the development of its global position. Though more and more companies built, management of companies cannot catch up with the development of the companO j ] ?ies. Management is a burgeoning field in China, so I hope I can acquire more modern knowledge on management in England. The roots of my strong interest in busiQ q % Mness can be traced back to my childhood. My2 c k f father was among the first of China’s n[ # t 5 y % J mew breed of modern entrepreneurs. As a young girl, it was inspirational hearingr D q U T 9 g C about his busin[ [ c 8 g S } 6ess ventures, and meeting the varied and interesting circle of entrepreneurs.R P / ; 2 My mother was also involved in busi) % U tness as an accountant, helping him with simple calculations. And so it was early in my life that I hoped I, also, would someday be able to enter the realm of business.

  With the time o6 h Sf growing up, I preferred reading books to satisfy my curiosity. I never ceased to contemplate over the questions I encountered. Subjects on business and management became a special fascination to me and my knowledge of psychology as well as interest in this field was increasing rapidly.

  As a high school student in China, I had to concentrate on the College Entrance Examination (CEE), even so, books not related to the exams were never excluded from my life. Unfortunately when sitting in the exam in June, 20xx, I was so nervous that I didn’t score well in the CEE exam. I enrolled in thf p q w o A ( Le department of Computer Science in Zhejiang College of Traditional Chinese Medicine. Any attempt to persuade myself to focus on my major turned out to be a failure at the beginning of my college life. After several terms, I realized that I would never be interested in being a programmer or an engineer. At that moment, I lost my direction and objectives.

  My persistence in reading saved me from the dark situation. As a matter of fact, I enjoyed reading the booksA * $ & v / : included Encyclopedia American, and some books about management by Peter F.Drucker. I began to notice something interesting: Why some companies can produce more than others? Why some company can sell more than others? Why some companies canG o # ` P = build up but others cannot when facing the same difficulties?

  With tw G R $ c G .he questions in my % 9 o $ P 4 . 3y mind, I started to read many relevant books. I was lucky to read the book “Jack: Straight from the Gut”by Jack Welch, in Which John A. Byrne makes a clear illustration that the management is important for a company. When I was a junior, I ran a bookshm - 3 ! l Fop by myself near my school. I should manage not only the finance in the shop but also the employees in my shop even made some strategies to enlarge the business in my shop to hold on the run the shop. From this, my interpersonal skills and the capacity in business has been greatly developed, definitely I was increasingly interested in what I was doing. By December, 20xx, I had finally determined to take business management as my^ 5 V F B k career instead of IT. To accumulate more relevant knowledge, I strived to gain more practical work experience in some big companies.

  Fortunately, as a send S $ O y ? p N iior, I began by condB % s T K } M Q xucting an internship in the Architecture Company in Zhejiang Province. Over six months, I worked as an assistant of the manager to harmonize the relationship between the different departments in this company and to draft some management system, which broadened my perspective of manab o j CgemenZ X G 6 S r i gt conditions and business performance in different industries. The experience showed me that management is much more important than that of I thought in big companies. After graduation, I continued my work in this company. In May, 20xx, the company offered me an opportunity to participate in an training program held byu N 8 + A p # D a famous management school. Through in-depth discussions with teachers and students in the classes, they all encouraged me to pursue my future career in management field because of my intellectual ability and the brand new ideas I mentioned.

  During the shoC D ] % M 5rt period of training, I realized that pursuing a higher degree in management is a wise choice for me now. Lancaster, with its excellence in management, represents the perfect fit forP B A o my needs. In your challenging environment, I can build the required foundation of knowledge related to management to achieve my go+ wals. I am firmly convinced that your admission will be my first step of success. With this in mind, I hereby submit my application, and await your favorable reply.

  范文二、

  I am a student, graduated from BaoYang middle school, Nanning, GuangXi auto^ 1 I T Xnomous region, in 20xx. I am still studying in high school now, because I was not enrolled by the ideal unive; R I Ursity last year. Recently, I have a dream to study abroad. Then I search online and find that it is more convenient and suitable for me to go to New Zealand for study.

  First, New Zealand iy / _s a multicultural country, which has the most advanced education in the world. Second, the tuition is lower than other countries’, which I think is mo

  re reasonable for me. Finally, the climate of New Zealand is similar with the climate of the South of China. Considering above reasons, I told my parents my plan o( } R v O U o wn going to New Zealand for study, and my parent agreed with me.

  As a girl, I like preschool education since I was young. Nowadays, Chinese parents, who want their children to get better education, pay more attention to preschool educath A } % O 7ion. If I study specialized curriculA o w 4 F f $ }ums on preschool education, I will go back China and work hard on preschool education after leaving college.

  My plan is as fol+ f p j , [ 1 * Flows: first, I plan to study English in language institute for about a half year in New Zealand. Then, I will study specialized curriculums on preschool education.

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